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Have you thought about using water color instead?
it looks like water color so
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The bike itself is not on the same level as your ghost rider, but is still well done in its own right. I am especially impressed with the mysterious writing on the part under the handles. This "writing" shrinks to a nearly unmanageable size, and yet the coloring is still of good quality.
I also appreciate the color spectrum used in this piece - how it sticks to darker and earthy tones. This is completely appropriate for the atmosphere your created.
The one area that sticks out to me in a negative sense is the highlight in the form of a circle right where the orange writing is. The edges of this highlight seem to sharp and abrupt to create a smooth, natural transition from the color of the highlight to the pure black around.
Besides that, superb work!
I feel like once you were inspired, you just ran with it and was able to crank out this beauty. :]
Of course, we've seen some images like this before around: some sinister looking fellow riding a motorcycle... but the way you pulled it off is something I've never seen before. You obviously have the colored pencil technique down very well. I only feel like the motorcycle looks a bit unfinished in shading when put in contrast with the figure...
The flames and chains are rendered well and compliment the whole piece a lot.
My favorite part of this piece is probably how the shading on the shirt/vest/jacket is :]
I just feel like this piece is missing a definite light source though [but that may be because of the flames all around casting lights of their own...]
overall : really good job :]
now to go off and practice more of this "legit" critiquing that's not in comments ._. ... or something
*pretends that first venture was mildly successful*
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